Lovely New World
A downloadable game for Windows and macOS
Synopsis
Lovely New World is a slice of life RPG with adventure and action.
The game starts with [your name] being reincarnated in a fantasy world (Ah! The good old cliché.)
Girls
Belle Delphine
Luna (KonoSuba)
CowGirl (Goblin Slayer)
Why support me?
I am unemployed and will not be able to bring new updates for a while.
Well, I am the developer, writer and screenwriter of Charlotte & Lovely New World.
The artwork is paid for by an artist I met on Fiverr. With your contributions, I will bring you more images and animations in the future.
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No 2024 posts on patreon. Hope that the game is still in development
just asking but are you alright and is this game still being worked on
will there be an android version?:)
Greetings, do you have a discord server yet? it will help alot if you want people helping you out with alot of stuff for sure, I have one for (nsfw) game devs if you want to drop by you are welcome https://discord.gg/FDwjADexFC
Thanks a lot, I'll go in and take a look.
Before I offer my help with the translation I need to ask.
What is your native language?
Portuguese
Sorry for the delay on answering, but life has been a mess.
I can do English to Spanish and Spanish to English, despite how similar Portuguese and Spanish is I doubt I could work with it.
I'm sorry to say I didn't even get to one image.
The start is very slow. The dialog is very basic and not at all interesting, though I do appreciate the Goddess and her sympathy to her character.
However, after that: too much walking. I had to go through several screens without knowing what to do. The sign posts seem to be non-interactive so I couldn't use them to find my way. I don't think there was even a map I could use.
I never made it to town. There's too little promise of content (which I appreciate, because it sets expectations), but even trying to get to that part seems like so much tedium and poorly planned execution.
If you can change one thing, especially since there's so little reason to be going around such a vast world, make it so that you automatically head into town and meet someone.
The world feels empty for a basic demo. Close off the paths and mention that you're going to fill them in later, or shrink the world. There's just too much walking even with dash.
Thanks for the feedback, the way to town is just to go left and up. The buildings are with barriers to make the world less empty. In version 0.1, I will add more things, and the focus will be on the farm.
About the signage, I will make it clearer in the updates.
You could stand to have the Goddess mention that to the player or add a key item, "Directions to town, in case you forgot! - Goddess". It seems like a LOT of walking to go into town, and a strange place to start us off considering that there aren't any plainly obvious characters or things to interact with.
The world feels empty enough already without NPCs or any interesting sights.
About the Npcs, I will add some just to fill in, but they will be replaced by those who will add to the story. The starting point is that cliché of isekai. The demo was only to present the concept and change some things as feedb
If it's going to be this empty, might as well just skip to the interactions with the ladies. The world is too empty and gives a bad impression, in my opinion.